Chapter 214 Teacher Shen, who is active in learning
"This line is so powerful."

It turned out that since Shen Lang had written it, he inserted all the classic scenes of Wu Jingzhong in his mind into the script one by one.

"Emei Peak, and a fucking solo photo, quite romantic, huh?"

"Time is like a wild donkey. Once it starts running, it won't stop."

"The first night is more tiring than digging a vegetable cellar."

"You've got wrinkles all over you, just like my prostate is always rebelling."

"It doesn't matter what ghosts know. People are even more evil than ghosts!"

"Politics without humanity is short-lived. In our eyes, they are small people; in the eyes of the Ministry of Defense, we are small people."

"I want to make a mistake. I want to be fired. If I keep lying like this, I'm just lying to myself!"

……

The more Shen Lang wrote, the more addicted he became. He had no idea how many times he had watched this drama in another time and space.

All the plots, especially Stationmaster Wu’s every smile, every word, every movement, seemed to be engraved in his mind.

He writes it coolly, but it's scary for others to read.

Especially Jiang Wei, the director and screenwriter.

My goodness, he worked so hard to expand this 12,000-word short story into a TV series script, just like squeezing toothpaste.

And Shen Lang...

It took Shen Lang less than an hour to re-write almost all of Wu Jingzhong's lines and those between Wu Jingzhong and others.

No, it's more than that.

He also changed a lot of other characters' lines.

For example, Xie Ruolin.

"You think my watermelons are too expensive, so you want to kill me? If you can't kill me with one shot, and I'm alive again, we can still do business, as long as the price is fair."

"Now there are two gold bars here. Tell me which one is noble and which one is dirty."

"Look at those officials. They talk about ideology but their minds are full of business!"

……

Shen Lang is not stupid. He knows that his performance today is already scary. He put away his pen, his face full of shame: "Director, I'm sorry, I just write whatever I think of. I really didn't change your script on purpose!"

Everyone: "..."

Jiang Wei: “…”

Damn, brother, here's the thing, if we give you a pen, can you change the script beyond recognition tonight?
Isn't this what you call intentional?
If you wanted to be deliberate, did you change all of them except the two words "lurking"?

Jiang Wei picked up the script that Shen Lang had revised with a troubled look on his face.

There are many golden sentences and witty remarks.

Shen Lang is not a mender, but he has sublimated the entire script.

For each character, if we say that in Long Yi's original work, these characters are "1", then in his own script they are "3", but after Shen Lang's revision, Wu Jingzhong and Yu Zecheng are "10" and Xie Ruolin is "8" in this play.

Jiang Wei sighed in his heart, perhaps, this is talent.

Some people study diligently for three years, but in the end they still cannot score lower than the top student who sleeps in class every day in the college entrance examination.

Looking at Shen Lang, who was full of shame and shyness, Jiang Wei said seriously: "Teacher Shen, I will give you an additional 200,000 yuan. Please re-organize the script. What do you think?"

Shen Lang was about to agree when he heard this, but after thinking for a moment, he said, "Director, I changed the script and delayed the crew's progress. I can't take the 200,000!"

"Well, since almost everyone has arrived, the director would like to invite us all to get together at the best hotel in Hengdian. How about that?"

"it is good!"

"Haha! Let's let loose today!"

Jiang Wei was stunned when he heard this, and any resentment he had towards Shen Lang in his heart disappeared at this moment.

"Teacher Shen, you are such a person..." At this point, he gave Shen Lang a thumbs up. Everyone nodded in their hearts, yes, Shen Lang did a great job.

Especially Wang Gang, at this moment he sighed in his heart: "No wonder Shen Lang can write the Studebaker Principle, no wonder Shen Lang is now doing so well in the circle."

"Two hundred thousand is not a lot, but it's not a small amount either. However, Shen Lang still owes the bank, but he was able to give up two hundred thousand in exchange for the director's favor!"

"If he doesn't succeed, who will?"

After dinner in the evening, Shen Lang locked himself in the hotel.

It took him a whole night to perfect the entire script.

In fact, Jiang Wei's adaptation level is still very high, otherwise, he would not be known as the "famous director of spy war films" in the circle.

It's just that he hasn't perfected many details yet.

Some directors start filming very quickly after receiving the script, while others change the script while filming.

Therefore, it is better to be humble and low-key in life.

The next morning, just after Shen Lang took a shower and shaved, the doorbell rang.

Jiang Wei was standing outside, also feeling listless after not sleeping all night. When he saw Shen Lang, he quickly asked, "Teacher Shen, how are you?"

Shen Lang smiled and said, "Director, everything has been changed!"

Jiang Wei was stunned for a moment, then asked in great surprise: "Is everything done?"

Shen Lang nodded and said seriously: "Director Jiang, your script is already very good, I am just adding icing on the cake, of course it will be fast!"

It can help me improve the script and take care of my own opinions.

Which director doesn’t like such an actor?
Shen Lang also learned and applied Wu Jingzhong's steppunk principle.

Jiang Wei rubbed his hands happily and said, "Let's go and try out the play today. When Teacher Shen talked about the play yesterday, I couldn't help but want to see your performance!"

At this point, he was suddenly stunned: "Teacher Shen, why don't you take a rest? You have been busy all night!"

Shen Lang smiled and said, "Director, let's do it in one go! Let's go!"

Jiang Wei became even happier after hearing this, and he took Shen Lang's arm and walked out.

After breakfast, everyone heard that Shen Lang had spent the entire night revising the script and had actually finished it.

Wow, what speed is this?
I thought it would delay the start of work, but I didn't expect it to be so fast.

"Teacher Shen, thank you for your hard work!"

"Teacher Shen, why don't you take a rest?"

"Teacher Shen, your health is very important!"

"Teacher Shen, I brought you some health tea in a thermos cup, please drink some!"

Shen Lang took the thermos cup from Yao Cheng, nodded and said, "That's thoughtful. Thank you!"

After saying that, he unscrewed the cup and was about to drink, but unexpectedly, he saw small red wolfberries floating on the cup.

He looked up at Yao Cheng in surprise.

What the hell, what’s the point of this?
I am a bachelor and you are a married man.

Although I, Shen Lang, am a scumbag, I still have principles, okay?

snort!
Besides, who are you looking down on?
With my small waist, do I need this thing?
joke!

Shen Lang did not drink what was in the cup. He simply screwed the lid on and handed it back to Yao Cheng without making any expression.

Yao Cheng was stunned and said: "Teacher Shen, you..."

Mr. Shen, who was rectifying the unhealthy trends in the entertainment industry, was online again. He walked up to Yao Cheng and whispered, "I'm sorry, I can't accept the concern of a married person! Thank you!"

He had just finished speaking when he heard a crew member shout, "Teacher Yao, are you here? Your husband is here to visit us!"

(End of this chapter)