Chapter 355

The script written by Shen Lang this time begins with the scene where Su Can and his son are performing on the street and their tendons in their hands and feet are broken by Zhao Wuji.

In Zao Wou-Ki's words, Su Can's life "can only be like mud"!
This is already miserable, isn't it?

Let’s watch next!
Shen Lang called Zhou Xingxing, Zhang Min, Wu Mengda and other actors to explain the situation.

Wang Jingjing on the side looked at Shen Lang and the others curiously, trying to figure out what his rules were, but due to his status, he was embarrassed to get too close, and in the end he didn't hear anything.

"What's so great about that? Movie scripts are nothing more than telling stories. Although the story structure may vary, the essence remains the same. I don't believe you can come up with anything extraordinary!"

After Zhou Xingxing and the others finished reading the script, everyone's faces changed.

Everyone looked at Shen Lang in shock.

Shen Lang smiled and said, "Let's give it a try and see how it works."

Wu Mengda sighed slightly in his heart, thinking that Shen Lang was indeed worthy of his reputation. After his filling in the gaps, the script suddenly became more infectious and free of clichés.

Zhou Xingxing also thought to himself, "Inviting Shen Lang was indeed the right choice. Shen Lang is obviously more perfect and more rounded than Wang Jingjing in handling these details! I should listen to his opinions more in the future!"

When Zhang Min was with Xiang Huasheng, she often heard Xiang Huasheng talk about Shen Lang's talent. She used to think that Xiang Huasheng was exaggerating a bit, but through this script just now, she realized that Xiang Huasheng's previous evaluation of Shen Lang was still conservative.

He is not only the amazing actor in "Black Gold", but also a screenwriter with extraordinary talent!
so amazing!

If Wang Jingjing's idea is followed, as the heroine, she really took great pains and used provocation to make Su Can wake up.

But this writing style has a disadvantage, which is that it will give the audience the feeling that the heroine is poisonous.

Things are different after Shen Lang made this change.

She immediately felt that Rushuang was a wiser and more likable woman.

Shen Lang clapped his hands and said, "Alright, everyone can start preparing. Memorize your lines! Start shooting now!"

After half an hour.

Scene: Ruined temple

A large group of ragged beggars gathered in the temple.

Wu Mengda sat among the crowd and talked freely.

"That day, I stepped into the examination room and looked up at the examiner. Wow... guess who they were?"

The camera moves from far to near, and a group of beggars ask curiously: "Who is it?"

"It's that son of a bitch Senggelinqin!"

"This bastard has a grudge against my father and me!" Wu Mengda rolled up his sleeves and cursed indignantly, "I get so angry when I mention him..."

"Have a cigarette first! It's very exciting!" The beggar next to him was attracted by the story and hurriedly coaxed Wu Mengda to continue.

"That bastard, we, father and son, spared his life that day in Yihong Courtyard..."

While Wu Mengda was still bragging, the camera slowly turned left, and Zhou Xingxing was seen lying miserably on the ground of the ruined temple with his hands and feet tied with wooden sticks. He looked with empty eyes at his father who was in a very bad situation but still remained positive and optimistic.

"They tampered with the weapons. Fortunately, my son has the real stuff..."

As his father boasted, Su Can's eyes gradually became empty. Outside the venue, Zhang Min, who was specially arranged by Shen Lang, began to read the narration: "My husband must be a martial arts master, a top scholar, second only to the emperor, and above ten thousand people. Can you do it?"

"It can be done!"

When everyone heard this, they all knew that this was Shen Lang's shot design. In the formal post-production, Zhang Min's narration would flash back to the scene in Yihong Courtyard. Seeing this, the staff on the set thought about it for a moment and immediately felt that Shen Lang's narration in this place was really wonderful.

The story begins with a tiny bit of grass and ends with a huge wave. The origin of the story is Rushuang's impossible request, which sets the stage for the upcoming reunion.

"Write your name immediately!" the actor playing the emperor narrated.

Zhou Xingxing muttered in the middle of the scene: "I can't... write!"

Another flashback, from the pride of the competition in the parade ground to the fall to the mortal world after being exposed as illiterate.

Then Zhao Wuji crippled his hands and feet!
Scenes from the past kept flashing back in his mind.

Life, because of a promise, goes from being high and mighty to being crushed into dust.

Regret?
Everyone present couldn't help but start thinking from the perspective of the protagonist Su Can.

Even Wang Jingjing was thinking in her heart that Shen Lang was still suppressing himself.

How long will he suppress the protagonist? This is a comedy, why can't he let the protagonist have fun all the way? Is this really a good thing?
"Ah..." It turned out that everything just now was a dream. Zhou Xingxing woke up from his dream with a start. The beggars who were listening to the story around him had already dispersed.

Wu Mengda walked over from not far away: "Achan, what's wrong? Did you have a nightmare again? Don't think too much..."

At this point, Wu Mengda handed the steamed bun in his hand to Su Can: "Here, take it. Although you have rested for two months and your hands and feet can move, they are not fully healed yet..."

When he was at the lowest point in his life, his father’s comfort gradually melted the originally impetuous boy’s heart with family love.

The past is like a dream, so I continue to live in a muddleheaded way, immersed in the past and unable to extricate myself;
Or, stand up straight, walk out of the dilapidated temple, walk out of your heart, protect your family from wind and rain, and live a down-to-earth life again.

Although this segment is not funny and does not contain any thought-provoking scenes, it is obvious that Shen Lang is using the camera to describe the process of Su Can's transformation from an ignorant boy into an upright man.

Such a process does not exist in Wang Jingjing's version.

Because he pursues a fast pace, pursues the advancement of the plot, and pursues the rapid growth of the characters.

But this part of Xu He's performance reveals the rare tenderness and transformation of Su Can in the movie.

In this way, subsequent changes will feel less abrupt and more rounded, and will make the subsequent plot more tense.

So, second-rate screenwriters write plots, and first-rate screenwriters write about human nature.

Sure enough, in the next scene, Su Can’s father caught a cold.

There was a heavy snow and wind outside the dilapidated temple. If they didn't go and ask for some warmth and food, both of them would die in the dilapidated temple.

Should I continue to live in the past, or should I move on in order to protect my father who has always been my father?

This is a multiple choice question for the hero.

What choice will the protagonist Su Can make?

The trembling father struggled and said, "A-chan, you must be hungry. Dad will go out and get something for you to eat!"

Su Can looked at his sick father who was still thinking about him, and finally said, "Dad, lie down quickly. I'll go today!"

"Ah? You're going to beg for food?"

"It's no problem. I'll find a way! You take a rest. I'll get the money back and take you to see a doctor!"

At this moment, the martial arts champion Su Qier just appeared in the film!
(End of this chapter)