Chapter 66 Warning from Su Mu
Tomorrow is Chow Tai Fook’s store anniversary event, and Song Xiaowei also stayed up late to write a script.
After arriving at the company this morning, she handed it over to Xu Yun.
"Take a look. This is what I wrote yesterday." Song Xiaowei looked very confident.
Just waiting for Xu Yun to finish reading and praise him.
But after reading it, Xu Yun did not praise it. Instead, he frowned and asked, "You wrote it all night, and this is it?"
“???” Song Xiaowei.
"No, go write another one."
Song Xiaowei listened to Xu Yun's words and asked unconvincedly: "Why not?"
"This is just a template script for an exam. It's fine for formal occasions, but not suitable for our current event."
Xu Yun explained: “Our event this time is mainly aimed at ordinary people, consumers, or more elderly people.
In a word, your hosting lines are like castles in the air, out of touch with reality, and cannot stimulate the emotions of consumers who watch the event live. "
"I don't think so. I think there is nothing wrong with what I wrote."
"Okay, that's it."
Xu Yun smiled and said, "Why don't we send this script of yours to our client and ask her to give her some comments?"
"Row."
Other colleagues in the office all seemed to be getting excited.
Someone commented cautiously: "It's brainless for a new intern to argue with the person who supervises him."
"Yes, even if she wins Xu Yun in the end, so what? Whether she can be promoted or not, Xu Yun's words are very important."
"You men just don't understand."
A female colleague said: "Maybe they just come here for an internship and to brush up their resume, and they have no intention of staying here at all."
"Yes, yes, yes, I am very ambitious."
"Think about it, when we first came here and were interns, we dared to do this?"
"You bunch of single men are still licking and trying to please others, thinking you have a chance, do they take you seriously?"
"Look at Xu Yun again, is he like you?"
"." The other men were silent for a moment.
Xu Yun took out his cell phone, found Jiang Peiyao's WeChat, and gave her the script that Song Xiaowei had just written.
[Xu Yun: Manager Jiang, this is our script this time, please give me your opinion on it.]
A few minutes later.
【Jiang Peiyao: Did you write this? It's OK, there aren't any major problems, but there aren't any highlights either.
I personally feel it's too formal and a bit too conventional, which doesn't quite fit with your plan.
However, event planning is done by you, you are a professional, and it is mainly about you.
If you think it's okay, then it's okay. 】
In Chow Tai Fook's store, Jiang Peiyao felt a little regretful after sending this message.
I won't offend him by saying this, right?
Fortunately, her worries were unnecessary.
Soon Xu Yun's message came back.
【Xu Yun: Okay, I’m not satisfied with it either. I’ll write another one for you.】
Jiang Peiyao breathed a sigh of relief when she saw this.
【Jiang Peiyao: Thank you, thank you for your help. 】
Xu Yun showed Song Xiaowei the message on his phone screen and said, "Did you see it? The other party is not satisfied."
"."Song Xiaowei.
I spent an entire evening writing the script, but it was rejected just like that.
"You said my castles in the air, but are you sure you can write a better script than me?"
Xu Yun smiled and said, "I happen to have a copy here, would you like to take a look?"
"Okay, send it to me."
After Song Xiaowei received Xu Yun's file, she took a look and couldn't help saying, "The scripts you wrote are not professional at first glance. There are a lot of nonsense, the wording is not rigorous, and it's even a bit childish." "What professional knowledge do ordinary people understand? They just need to listen to what they like to hear and what they understand."
Xu Yun said: "You studied broadcasting and hosting. The hosting style is not exactly the same on TV and outside TV, in the recording studio and on the street.
Our current event is an open-air store anniversary event. To put it simply, the merchants use the store anniversary as an excuse to hold promotional activities.
This is no different from street marketing. The host’s task is to stimulate the enthusiasm and consumption impulse of the people on the scene through his own words. "
"That's not called a host, that's a seller!"
Song Xiaowei had no idea that her first job opportunity would be at such an event.
"Yes, you can understand that."
Xu Yun said unhappily, "Not everyone can be a host at a high-end TV station right after graduation and read the news script seriously.
Often most people are doing the job that you just disliked.
For example, wedding host, variety show host, event host, etc.
Although I don’t know much about hosting, I know that the most important characteristic of a host is that he should know how to adapt to the situation on the spot and avoid hosting accidents.”
"."Song Xiaowei.
"Aren't you very confident in your lines and don't care about my script?"
Xu Yun continued: "Then I will send my script to the other party now and see how he reacts."
"it is good."
So Xu Yun sent his script to Jiang Peiyao.
Soon, the other party's message came back.
[Jiang Peiyao: This script is very good, much better than the previous one. I even suspect that the previous script was not written by you at all, haha...]
Song Xiaowei looked at the other party's reply with an unhappy expression.
The script that I just laughed at was actually praised by the other party in this way.
“School and society are not the same place.”
Xu Yun said: "Once you leave school, you are a rookie. You must learn with an open mind."
Song Xiaowei looked at everyone's eyes on her, returned to her seat, and started to daze.
I was actually outdone by a man who looked idle and amateurish in what I was best at.
Also criticized for being useless.
The key is that this evaluation is recognized by a third party!
[Faced with the doubts from the company's interns, the host hit the other party's confidence at will, demonstrated his own strength, and was rewarded with 10 in cash. ]
Current bank card balance: 948 million.
Is there a reward for this too?
Although it wasn’t much, Xu Yun didn’t expect it and it was an unexpected surprise!
Xiaopang came over and said with a smile: "She must be depressed now. She was completely tortured by you."
"She thinks she's still in school, and thinks everyone should flatter her because she has good grades in her major and is pretty?"
Xu Yun said calmly: "You guys spoil her, but I won't. I haven't even learned how to walk in the company yet, but I'm acting like I want to fly and kill her."
"She just ran into a pervert like you."
Xiao Pang looked at Song Xiaowei's script and said, "She actually wrote it quite well. You can see that she has some real skills."
"Which company doesn't have great people?"
Xu Yun said: "Can you get promoted just by having ability? Having ability is just the basic requirement."
Xiaopang remained silent.
Yes, if one could be promoted with ability, he, Xu Yun, should have been in Manager Li's position long ago.
Su Mu also saw all this in his office and frowned.
When she met Song Xiaowei in the tea room, she said calmly, "Song Xiaowei, I didn't invite you here to argue with others.
This is a company, not your school.
If you want a good internship, just listen to Xu Yun. If you don’t want to study, you can leave tomorrow.
understand? "
Su Mu looked at her and spoke softly, but the invisible aura he exuded made Song Xiaowei feel pressured.
"I understand, Manager Su." Song Xiaowei listened to Su Mu's warning and felt what the workplace was like for the first time.
Please give me a monthly ticket~
(End of this chapter)